It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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The concept of incorporating open-air communal zones into urban areas has surged in importance recently. Despite the minor increase in criminal activities that these zones could potentially invite, I firmly advocate such progressive schemes owing to the significant benefits they offer for community well-being. While it is true that minor transgressions might slightly escalate in these communal zones, the example of Nguyen Hue pedestrian square in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, drives home the point. Since its inauguration in 2018, the square has welcomed an impressive number of visitors who find pleasure in leisurely strolls, social interactions, and familial bonding. In such crowded spaces, individuals, engrossed in their activities, often become susceptible to petty criminals. This unfortunate situation not only affects the victims but could also tarnish the reputation of Ho Chi Minh City as a secure and welcoming destination.
However, it remains evident to me that open-air communal zones play a critical role in promoting physical fitness. A multitude of parks, gardens and squares offer an array of resources for physical activity, free of cost. Places such as those in Hanoi equip residents with exercise amenities and conduct fitness activities without imposing any charges. Moreover, these zones, typically abundant in foliage, offer a refreshing respite from the pollution-ridden atmosphere of crowded cities. Recent urban planning research has revealed a positive correlation between the proximity of such spaces and the regularity of exercise among residents, leading to an overall improvement in health.
In conclusion, despite the slight risk of petty crimes, I strongly endorse the establishment of communal zones in every city and town to foster healthier lifestyles. It would be beneficial for urban planners to dedicate at least 25 percent of the total development area to such green or communal spaces.
(By Khang IELTS- IELTS MASTER HCM- ENGONOW- Band 8.5)
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